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Wait
Inhale
Wait
Exhale
Breathe and breathe
Count each time the warm air
Whooshes past your cracked lips
Lower your hand down,
Down
Close your eyes,
Bite your lip
Imagine yourself amid the heat,
The sweat,
The sex
You’re alone in your room
So you wait and breathe and
Touch yourself awake
Inhale
Wait
Exhale
Breathe and breathe
Count each time the warm air
Whooshes past your cracked lips
Lower your hand down,
Down
Close your eyes,
Bite your lip
Imagine yourself amid the heat,
The sweat,
The sex
You’re alone in your room
So you wait and breathe and
Touch yourself awake
again with the midnight notebook ramblings
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Honest. Something a lot of writers would not dream of trying to share. A brave work.
I love the use of single words. They ask you to experience the breath in its fullness....a personal moment not lost to urgency. Very very well written.
I love the use of single words. They ask you to experience the breath in its fullness....a personal moment not lost to urgency. Very very well written.